My speech

This is my speech about sport.
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Click on the link above and you will be able to watch and listen to my speech.

Speech Assessment

L.I. - Present a formal speech

Introduction:

Captures your attention 5/5

Delivery:

Voice clarity / Pace 4/5

Volume 5/5

Posture / Eye contact 4/5

Content:

Topic is of interest to the audience 5/5

Meaning is clear 5/5

Ideas are presented in a logical order 4/5

Conclusion:

Summarises ideas 5/5

Leaves audience with something to think about 5/5

Personality projected in speech:

Enthusiasm 5/5

Total:   47/50

One thing I think I did really well was... I used an expert and I said my information clearly and I used expression.

An element of persuasive speech that I used was... I got the audience's attention and I left them something to think about.

One thing to work on for next time is... to make more eye contact with my audience and I need to keep still